Sunday, March 13, 2011

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Streets for fantasy: Exercises in Style: part two (or etciù)-IIA

Here comes other exercises in style, imagery and target acquisition of the purpose of understanding the use of a language so also evocative prose.


The imagery allows to approach the poetry to prose, the author is helping to externalize his feelings, giving it a shape that best fit their feel, is the reader to be involved in the imagination of others, nurturing one's own. The imagery is closing our eyes, is the image behind the eye a stream of images, it is an upset stomach or a slight chill on the skin: is the synergy between author and reader, and activities, is emotions, participation .


always, when I read a poem, introduces little or nothing, so I read it, mimicking his face, body and voice with the intonation of the denotative meanings, to help children to have a superficial understanding, and finally ask them to close their eyes and I read (with music) ... reopened his eyes, wondering what they have "heard" and "imagined" in ... a blaze of, "I am I! Me!" and senses ... And on the basis of their images, go to the hunting of the "trick" (the imagery) that the author has used to inspire those images and those feelings ...
experience, I must say, "strong" for me and for them ...


To get them to engage in a creative way so the imagery, to help bring out their feelings, as well as their imagination (or madness sound ;-)) ... we had fun do descriptions of places and people using only a specific figure of speech ...


Introducing the style exercises in prose : I read some good (or not?):



  • Descriptions carried out only with similarities ( Cecilia Bernardini)



The Drunk Elf
E 'tall as a bottle cap and is worn like a chubby ball of wool. He has no eyes shining like a mirror and a red nose just like a tomato polished, because it is always drunk as a drunk that will not stop drinking. When he walks, goes to and fro like a ship in rough seas, do not ever look forward to being where he puts his feet. It has two cheeks hot as fire on and just as aggressive as it is a piece of bread.


Giant Bored


as two shutters has tired eyes that slowly close. Walk around as slow as a snail. He is always hungry, and fat like a balloon. It moves and goes up and down like a gazelle velocente. Sings like a sparrow. Every now and then through some magazines.




The Sleepy Zombie

walked like an old man among the various rooms. The eyes of blacks as pitch, is closed to the beat of the hands. The body was paralyzed. He wore a long white coat like the milk just as no one ever paid and yawned. His hands were like two flies hanging vines. And the legs, moving the necessary, were dry like two toothpicks.






  • Description Perform only metaphor (to be added)

  • Descriptions performed only with personifications (store)


The prof


Thursday, March 10, 2011

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IIIA - from the largest one should always take roads for example

Yep, the carnival ended recently, but still lingers in our school the liveliness and excitement of this festival. As usual ( trouble if it were not so) the 3A has struck again with the intent to leave an indelible mark in school history.

TUESDAY 'GREASE
. A day like any other, except that the janitors to recreation we have the delicious sweets of the festival, the usual school day in which the time passes slowly between a professor and another. We at 3A, but we were already elated from the night before.

- Hey, is the last year ... do something so SAGW rdo here for the will be difficult to forget ... - so it was about a week that this thing was confabulating special.

the morning to the fateful day, everyone had lost its identity and was transmuted into another being. In short, we dressed them all. or do not know the magine the effort of the teachers had to explain the lesson before elves, Minnie, and especially before men dressed as women .

short, a beautiful madhouse! Ot thyme no way to make your mark?

And now ....

Tattara '!

we are in the various forms THIS 'THE PROOF YOU NEED TO ENJOY LIFE WITH FRIENDS, FUN, AND NOT IN A HURRY AVEVRE looks great.

Well, what about the union did here .... 'I MATTU! ;)


Elisa De Paolis



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Elisa Well well ...
there I promised a videetto worthy of you?
Ready with Maalox handy ...


ENJOY!
(oh my God, "good" not so much ...)




With usually affected (and the solid sliced)
The Professor! .

Wednesday, March 9, 2011

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Paris is there ...

Saturday, February 26, 2011

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fantasy: Exercises in Style: take, first! -IIA

Arringovisitatori, I'm not dead! ;-) (I would have given the good news boys)
I'm back here to update you (as a bit 'I do not do) on the work of Arringoboys!


Resume then a little 'speech with the IIA: we are facing and reinforcing writing connotative, ie one that uses certain rhetorical devices so expressive. Thing that so, it would be maybe a hammer sull'alluce ...:-)


rhetoric and its figures, in fact, are much more present to what we believe in everyday life and be able to explain in shape can be not only useful but also very funny! The evocative power of the figures is remarkable: you want to put "snow" with "slowly crumbles heaven" ? you want to put "the rustle of leaves" with "mumbled the old tunes forest" ? There seems to be there to really feel that green or whisper to see the slow dance of the snowflakes?
so I told the guys that make use of figures increases the involvement of the reader, it makes him and encouraged him to active reading : if they want that their text comes out from the page and take life behind the eyes and mind of the reader ... have to pull out your suitcase and take the right tools! :-)


What can he do? A simile? A metaphor? A synesthesia? A personification? And why? What do you mean with that figure? What do you suggest? What experience?


These are important questions that kids should do when you approach to writing expression.
If is to stimulate the imagination of the reader ... you must be careful in the choice of instrument and to avoid overloading.


We started with a poem by A Negri, a day that was really snowed:


DANCE SNOW
the fields or roads,
quiet and mild,
wheeling, snow
falls.
Dance flap white
it the wide sky playful,
then rests on the ground,
tired .
motionless in a thousand forms,
rooftops and chimneys,
on stones and gardens,
sleeping.
All of it is about peace
closed in deep oblivion,
indifferent world
silent.


And after you have read, commented and analyzed the tools used by the poet, taking advantage of the white landscape that we had around, here's what they wrote some of them, standing on the ledge, or imagining ... Stand out:





The first flakes of snow

fall
and in a moment the bare trees with a white coat s

are covered

Children run in the street

there is happiness

the Snowmen style garden

decorate
Snow is the magic of
Snow is the joy of a child
The rest of the winter snow is
Snow is silent .... .
Constance Testa



I saw the sky
white flakes falling on my face,
white flakes, soft .....
I locked up a statue in a glass bubble,
no one heard me,
no longer existed,
just me and the snow ...
Cecilia Bernardini


And why stop at the snow, reuse of others' styles ? Starting with photos of children or those taken from the internet ... ... the boys are indulged with poems by the four seasons!
Carry two years of style Flavia Mercado :


The Sun

Thou sun, which falls between
The Hiding
waves. You

sun, you make the sky a rainbow

in many colors.

The reflection on the water looks the way


What should I do to get to you,

The sea has become
A table,
where the waves seem to stay

between the arms of
sand. ;

Autumn


trees welcome you to gusts,
even greet the summer.

joke with the autumn leaves,
although silence is around.

The avenue goes to infinity,
although I get the impression of a finger.

And again Cecilia Bernardini, with his "Autumn is upon us"

The sky ride,
although 'round about everything is turned off,
the bare trees,
spoil the immense avenue,
though all lonely.

hovering in the air,
the first leaves fall slowly ....
painting the landscape.

A colorful carpet, painted
autumn color,
ignites gold scarlet
sunlight.

Wind jokes
with the icy blue waters ....

All lights in colors ...

All is empty ....

Autumn is upon us .........


Again
You, Earth
You, Earth

're like a
solitary bird
flying in the sky.
Your boat
isolated in your
hands as a
child looking
of their parents.
Your mountain
is like
a boy in love.
Your trees
are like two
people
is so fond of.
Your water
thirsts for you
and your stones
need the
your company.

(Ilaria Tolomei)


And finally ... a good group of descriptive alliteration! (Oh my God, it seems that the poetic version dell'Alligalli ;-))


In large planetary

the bright moon,
lantern in the world,
illuminates the long fields of lemon trees.
clear light around her.



Elisa, Cecilia, Ilaria and Flavia



And why stop at poetry? Why not use these techniques even in the prose writing?


But that's another post ...!
:-)
The prof.